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1999

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I was seventy parts cloud
All blown into fractions
around you as distractions
Hanging on to your sour mouth

Small dips in my hazle skin
Of odd fingertip dents
and smokes put out
still felt 11 years older

I hide old grass stains
covering crooked knees
of when we fell of trees
as lost bits of planes

We ripped birds off skies
tied them on our shoelaces
and ran till we floated
like kites caught in the wind

Lost in hair and leaves
lay my little first kiss
she was my nineteen ninety-nine
along the rough may winds
When i was like 6 years old i was friends with this girl at a camp for fugitives and like 2 weeks ago i remembered her again and i forgot her name even though she was my first kiss (we were little and kids did that around there). So instead i just made this cause we did the weirdest things back then to just kill some time. Ironic that I regret forgetting most of it now.
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archelyxs's avatar
This is an excellent, beautifully written memory...
You are very creative. I'm really glad you took the chance to comment on my work so I can see yours!